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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 16:16:06 GMT -5
Since Yourstory doesn't have a Halloween story at the moment, I thought I'd post my little comic. I have the first page done, and it features me, Tyler, Ashley, Afton, Wesley, and Adam at the moment. I thought I'd post the characters first (not us) before I posted the first page. Some may be added along the way, and I may do our own character bios.
P.S. What do you want to be for Halloween? Costumes in this comic would be fun, especially since we kind of look alike.
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Bruce Leroy
Aspiring Author
Eat dat watermelon!
Posts: 647
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Post by Bruce Leroy on Oct 15, 2009 16:21:30 GMT -5
You need more COLOR in you story
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 16:30:30 GMT -5
 Name: Melantha Creature: Witch Description: She's the Head Hancho of the Fun House. It was created purely for her entertainment. She formed a little army to do her bidding and torture any poor, unfortinate souls who happen to wonder into her little fun house. Everything is a game to her, and she loves nothing more than to give a good scare. |
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 16:48:42 GMT -5
 Names: Mary and Beth Creature: Zombies Description: Two dead scientists that Melantha has brought back from the dead to join her army. They perform experiments and tests for her to better improve her methods, though their's don't really make any sense. Their test subjects are usually live, and they are hard to defeat since they feel no pain and can easily be put back together...aim for the head. |
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Oct 15, 2009 16:56:17 GMT -5
I DEMAND PORN OF THEM!!
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 17:03:39 GMT -5
 Name: Bonehead Creature: Skeleton Description: He's a lot like Beetlejuice...so that pretty much sums him up. He goes around with his cheerleader kidnapping women and turning them into "dolls". So girls in the fun house....beware. Names: Hilary and Larissa Creature: Dolls (like Sally from Nightmare Before Christmas) Description: Two girls created by Bonehead to be his personal cheerleaders. They don't do much. They really just follow Bonehead around, sing songs about him, cheer for him, and help him create more dolls. They, however, are almost impossible to kill since they aren't really alive. They are skin filled with fluff and stuff. If you tear them apart, they can be sewn back together. |
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Oct 15, 2009 17:04:26 GMT -5
PORN!
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Post by Mizagium on Oct 15, 2009 17:10:46 GMT -5
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 17:12:16 GMT -5
 Name: Lilith Creature: Vampre with spider powers Description: A vampiress drafted into Melantha's army, Lilith is very entusiastic about the fun house. She believse her partner, an older vampire who is also in the army (not drawn yet), is far less superior than herself. She doesn't believe in the old vampire ways, and, therefore, isn't affected by old vampire myths like silver stakes or holy water. She had an obsession with spiders and is a little on the crazy side. She's just waiting for someone to walk into her web that she can sink her teeth into. |
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Post by Mizagium on Oct 15, 2009 17:12:50 GMT -5
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 17:12:54 GMT -5
I know most of them are girls right now, but I'm adding a werewolf and vampire...I just have to draw them.
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 17:20:22 GMT -5
No..wait...  There. |
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Post by Mizagium on Oct 15, 2009 17:23:55 GMT -5
No..wait... There. Gross. |
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Post by Razgat on Oct 15, 2009 17:25:00 GMT -5
You never specified. I win.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Oct 15, 2009 17:25:18 GMT -5
i like it
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Post by Monika on Oct 15, 2009 19:20:37 GMT -5
This calls for a really awesome cameo appearance by none other than myself, Leon Veralice!
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Post by Monika on Oct 15, 2009 19:21:19 GMT -5
You need more COLOR in you story YOU WOULD GO THAT ROUTE YA DAYUM NEGRO |
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Oct 16, 2009 8:04:48 GMT -5
STOP HARASSIN MY LITTLE COTTON PICKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Monika on Oct 18, 2009 12:10:09 GMT -5
I demand my cameo appearance.
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Post by Razgat on Oct 18, 2009 13:36:56 GMT -5
You might show up in there. I have the first page done, I just wanted to add some more. I'll post later.
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