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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 22:04:00 GMT -5
Also, Shaun needs to note that were his mech reads "Eva Unit 1.0 NERVE", Klaus' reads "Eva Mark0.6 SEELE."
Also, Klaus' Evangelion is powered by a battle ship. His cord is attached to it.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 22, 2010 22:07:27 GMT -5
right.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 22:09:36 GMT -5
Take what ideas you deem useful.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 22, 2010 22:13:17 GMT -5
This will be a long chapter, depending on wher I stop it.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 22:16:02 GMT -5
All the better
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 22, 2010 22:18:02 GMT -5
if ti ends up being long, I'll have to establish a standard length to base future chapters off of.
usually, my minimum is 2000 words, but adam likes them longer...
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 22:26:06 GMT -5
I think that CH 1 was of pretty good length.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 22, 2010 22:36:44 GMT -5
yeah. I should have added the school parts for ch2...
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 22:48:44 GMT -5
Perhaps you could use the school scene as a segway into the Shamshel battle.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 22, 2010 22:52:22 GMT -5
I could just write the school stuff and re-update the last chapter.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 22:56:32 GMT -5
Be sure to tell people about it in the next chapter then.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 22, 2010 22:59:42 GMT -5
I will.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 22, 2010 23:01:34 GMT -5
Ok
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 23, 2010 22:28:01 GMT -5
Right before Klaus appears, have someone mention that they just lost contact with one of their ships patrolling off shore.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 28, 2010 20:40:45 GMT -5
Standing by
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 28, 2010 20:50:15 GMT -5
here
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 28, 2010 20:53:05 GMT -5
Ok. I don't really have any new ideas, but luckily there are plenty of ideas that I posted a couple days ago still lying around.
I believe that we should implement these ideas and add that extra portion to the previous chapter.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 28, 2010 20:55:44 GMT -5
all i need to do is the school scene up until Rachel appears and informs him of Shamshel's appearance
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Jul 28, 2010 21:00:36 GMT -5
There you go.
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Post by Mizagium on Jul 28, 2010 21:09:58 GMT -5
Shaun fight Thomas back, right?
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