Major Xeno
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Post by Major Xeno on Dec 4, 2008 16:35:20 GMT -5
She sliced through greenskin after greenskin, but they just kept coming, overwhelming her in a matter of seconds.
Naru sliced through another greenskin from head to toe, when another stepped up to take it’s place. With one of her katana’s stuck in a dead body of an ork, she carefully scrutinized the ork. This one was armored up in heavy armor, with darker skin and was about four feet taller than your average ork.
“ Ya mey ‘ave killed dem ovver snotlings, but I’se a Nob!” the Ork roared, slashing at Naru with a set of ‘Power Klaws.’ Naru dodged the Nob’s Klaws, then slashed at it’s head, only for it to smack the blade away with it’s hand.
Naru dodged a low stab at her stomach, then hopped back, her bandana coming off as she did.
“ You’ez a wuman!” roared the ork, somehow offended at fighting a ‘wuman.’
“ Aye!” roared Naru, chopping off it’s arm, and with it, the ork’s ‘Klaws.’
Naru took off the snarling Nob’s head with a twist of her wrist, then leaned back on a tree, freeing her katana as she did.
Naru looked carefully around her, then limped towards the ork encampment her squad of the Catachan XXIV ‘Waiting Death’ had been assigned to take out. She ran for a good minute, then came upon a hellish scene.
Eight Catachan Devils lay on the ground, dieing and bleeding massively from stab and slash wounds. She spotted Storm, bleeding from a gaping hole in his stomach. She saw Bullseye, his arms missing.
Sergeant ‘Fang’ Brooks fought Warboss Norgub Skullcrusher, the Warboss in charge of the Ork Waagh! on Seltura IV.
Sergeant Fang when head-to-head with Norgub, blocking his Power Klaw with his bionic powerfist, as he scythed his power sword towards Norgub’s head. Norgub slapped it aside with his other Power Klaw, roaring as he did.
Norgub slashed downward, as Sergeant Fang blocked barely, his arm twisted in a weird angle.
Sergeant Fang suddenly reversed his power sword, letting Norgub’s Power Klaw slice into his left arm, as Sergeant Fang chopped Norgub’s arm, reversing his blade again to slice off Norgub’s other Klaw. Without a limb to hold them, Norgub’s Power Klaws fell, slicing off Sergeant Fang’s sword arm off cleanly, as Norgub fell to his knees. Sergeant Fang stood in front of the kneeling ork, looking like a grim executioner before the condemned.
In a way, he was.
“ You should have realized, Warboss, that Catachan would come for you. Boasting about how you took Colonel Hard Head’s head, you didn’t think that his men would avenge him. But, too late.” snarled Sergeant Fang, and with his dying strength, smashed his powerfist into the Warbosse’s face.
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Major Xeno
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Post by Major Xeno on Dec 4, 2008 16:35:50 GMT -5
Naru sprinted towards Sergeant Fang, desperately telling herself that the invincible Sergeant ‘Fang’ Brooks wouldn’t die, couldn’t die. But…
“ Uzumaki… AHHH… don’t forget, Naru Uzumaki. You did good, Spider.” grunted Sergeant ‘Fang’ Brooks, coughing up blood. Without so much as a scream of pain, Sergeant ‘Fang’ Brooks pasted on to the afterlife, to the final battle for humanity.
“ Aye… Sarge…” mumbled Naru, her mind numb. She finally had her earned name, but at this cost?
She would rather have her squad back… (end Flashback)
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She stuck her head out of the room, making sure nobody was around, before walking out.
She walked down the stairs into a large living room, where her team was discussing something heatedly.
“ Oi.” grunted Naru, plopping herself down on the couch by Kakashi. She grabbed her proffered shirt and vest, slipping them on as Kakashi eye-smiled.
“ How long was I out?” said Naru, fixing her bandana back on.
“ Three days.” said Kakashi, eye-smiling again.
“ How did you get that power?” demanded Sasuke, glaring at Naru, who calmly strapped her katana onto her back.
“ I was born with it.” grunted Naru, standing up. She motioned to Kakashi and Hana, who nodded and followed her outside.
Naru turned, and saw Sasuke and Sakura following them. “ Go back. This is for Kakashi and Hana’s ears only.”
“ Oh, so you’re cheating on your Kyu-kun now?” said Kakashi.
Naru turned back around quickly and kneed Kakashi in the groin, snarling, “ Be lucky I’m in a good mood, Hatake.”
Kakashi collapsed on the floor, groaning in pain as he held his… uh… precious.
“ Sasuke, Sakura, go. I’m telling Kakashi and Hana a secret. Notice I said Kakashi and Hana, not Sasuke, Sakura, Hana and Kakashi.” said Naru, glaring back at Sasuke.
“ Hn.” Sasuke grunted, his tone angry.
Sasuke and Sakura turned around and walked back to the house, as Naru watched them.
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Post by Major Xeno on Dec 4, 2008 16:36:02 GMT -5
After they had disappeared into the house, She grabbed Kakashi by the arm, lifted him to his feet, and looked him in the eye as she whispered, “ Don’t you dare say I would cheat on Kyu-kun, you bastard.”
Kakashi grunted, not able to make any other sound.
Naru put Kakashi on her shoulders, then walked for a while, until she could no longer see the house.
She not-so-gently dropped him on the ground, then sat down beside him. She gathered up her thoughts, and considered her options.
Meanwhile, Hana was rolling on the ground, laughing her head off.
“ So, Hana, if you are an Inuzuka, where are you companions?” asked Naru out of the blue, surprising Hana.
“ They are injured, and my mom said it would be good to try to fight without them for once.” said Hana, scowling.
“ You hate to be separated from them, right?” said Naru.
“ Yeah,” said Hana, surprised.
Naru nodded, looking like an wise old woman briefly, before saying, “ My brother Leman Russ is like that. He can’t stand to be separated from his wolf-brothers, Freki and Geri mainly.” said Naru, smiling as she remembered the sight of Leman charging into battle in the middle of a pack of eight Fenrisian Wolves.
Hana was surprised, this Leman Russ sounded a lot like an Inuzuka.
Xxxx
After awhile, Kakashi stirred, and Naru turned to see Kakashi sitting up slowly.
“ Serves you right you prick.” muttered Naru darkly.
“ Alright Kakashi, this is going to take a while, so listen up or I will make sure the Hatake family dies out.” said Naru, instantly snatching Kakashi’s attention away from his groin, as Hana snickered.
“ It all started about ten thousand years ago….”
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“Damn…” whispered Kakashi, his brain working overtime to sort out all this new information.
“ That sums it up pretty good,” said Naru, fishing out a pack of what looked like cigarettes to Kakashi.
“ Want one?” Naru said, holding up the pack to him.
“ You know smoking is bad for you, right?” said Hana, as Kakashi pushed the pack down.
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Major Xeno
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Post by Major Xeno on Dec 4, 2008 16:36:23 GMT -5
Naru shrugged, then pulled out a cigarette and lit it.
“ Bah. One of the advantages of being a Primarch. I’m the only one of my family who smokes. Besides, these lho sticks aren’t as bad as cigarettes anyway.” she said, inhaling deeply.
“ Really?” asked Kakashi, curious.
“ No, their worse.” said Naru, flicking her lho-stick in the nearby pond. “… Right… Anyway, Zabuza is still alive, and I bet those Chaos Marines will come back too. We need to prepare for their attack.” said Kakashi, his tone changing quickly.
“ What makes you think he’s still alive?” asked Naru, confused.
“ He was ‘killed’ with senbon needles, which can also be used for pressure points. Besides, the hunter-nin didn’t chop his head off there and then. Anyhow, we still need to prepare for those Chaos Marines. If that was thirteen of them, I’d hate to see what twenty can do.” Hana explained, worried.
“ Bah. Don’t worry. My brother Leman Russ was tracking these guys, so he’ll be here soon. One week tops.” said Naru confidently, smiling slightly.
“ Zabuza will have recovered by one week, and what about those Marines? They could have more Marines right now, waiting to strike at any moment!” exclaimed Kakashi, totally freaking out.
WHAM!
Naru stood over Kakashi, who was on the ground, bleeding from his face.
“ Don’t EVER talk like that again, or I will castrate you with a rusty kunai!” She threatened, her face furious.
“ Never give up hope. Never stop, never retreat.” Naru said, her eyes cold and hard.
“ I expected this sort of attitude, but from Sakura, not a fully grown Jonin ninja! Grow a pair, will you!” roared Naru, barely controlling the urge to kick Kakashi in the groin again.
“ Now,” said Naru, calming down. “ I have no experience as a shinobi, which is why I am a Genin. I am going to train with my brother Angron, who is a master of almost every weapon known to man. You need to train Sasuke and Sakura to be able to help you with Zabuza, because I will have my hands full with the traitors.” explained Naru, fixing Kakashi in place with a glare.
“ Ok.” said Kakashi, as he tried to become ANBU Captain Wolf again, tried to become an insensitive, emotionless tool.
“ We better get started, because we’re going to need all the help we can get.” said Naru, slipping the pack of lho sticks into her pocket again.
Fin
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Major Xeno
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Post by Major Xeno on Dec 4, 2008 16:36:35 GMT -5
Comments, anyone?
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Post by Myrdraxxis on Dec 4, 2008 18:12:22 GMT -5
another awsome chapter. Though I am confused about something. U said that Leman Russ was comng....um isnt he dead?. In fact arnt MOST if not ALL the primarches dead?
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Post by Major Xeno on Dec 4, 2008 23:16:43 GMT -5
Check again.
Most of the Primarch's are indeed dead, but if you look at Vulkan, Leman Russ, Corax, Jaghati Khan, they are convientently 'missing.'
Whereas Alpharius/Omegron, where one could be dead, or like a hydra both could be alive, or whatever.
In this story, the missing primarchs are alive, and fighting for the Imperium behind the scenes.
Think about it. How many armies and fleets routinely 'dissapear' in the warp? How many are missing in the warp, and how many are destroyed by 'unknown enemy forces?'
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Post by Myrdraxxis on Dec 5, 2008 10:47:21 GMT -5
Ah, true that. I like it!
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