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Post by Monika on Apr 2, 2009 20:44:45 GMT -5
As Spring Break approaches us and I have nothing to do at all (how saddening) and have a good knowledge of what literature should (Lord of the Rings) and should NOT (Twilight) be, I am going to read any stories you request of me over the break and provide my constructive criticism. No story can grow without the author gaining encouragement and feedback. I'll be starting with Tyler's Seedling epic and work my way down in order from the first people who ask me to read a story. Please be aware that I won't give crap like "Good Job" or "Awesome". I'll be almost as bad as Mr. Hinson (for those of you who know him) or Ms. Havekost (her 11th grade teaching form.) This is completely optional, but I encourage you to make the most of it.
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Post by Xelwes on Apr 2, 2009 20:55:57 GMT -5
Read Run Away.
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Post by Razgat on Apr 2, 2009 20:57:33 GMT -5
Letters. It's not done, but I was going to start adding to it again.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Apr 3, 2009 8:13:27 GMT -5
anything by harry turtledove
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Post by Mizagium on Apr 3, 2009 18:26:53 GMT -5
Austin, I'm going to seriously ask a favor. All that I've written of Seedling is on the site. If you (OR ANYONE) would like to ACTUALLY PROOFREAD!!!! the story, please do so. I have ideas on how to fix things, but feel I cannot properly criticize my own work. As such, I would ask you (or anyone) to do that for me. You criticisms will be taken seriously and be appreciated.
Thanks in advance!
P.S. I could also email you the files so they can be printed out and written on.
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Post by Monika on Apr 3, 2009 19:12:53 GMT -5
If you could email them to me, that'll be great. I do better criticism and proofreading when they're on paper. PM me and I'll send you my email address.
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Post by Mizagium on Apr 3, 2009 19:15:05 GMT -5
k
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Post by Myrdraxxis on Apr 8, 2009 23:55:03 GMT -5
I see...well then I have no choice but to exorcise your soul, capture it in a vacuum and sell that to the Chinese via Ebay, then immolate (and incinerate) your body and then spread the ashes to the wind over the distant foothills of Cuba.
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Post by Mizagium on Apr 9, 2009 9:36:42 GMT -5
Why?
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Post by Monika on Apr 9, 2009 9:57:47 GMT -5
Tuba Justin's account was impersonating my own; Adam's post was a response to Justin's saying that he was in love with Edward and enjoyed Twilight. Of course I had to delete Justin's post before he angered them.
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Post by Mizagium on Apr 9, 2009 9:58:29 GMT -5
Anyway...
Have you looked over the story I sent you?
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Post by Monika on Apr 9, 2009 10:06:35 GMT -5
I actually meant to tell you that my computer won't open the file. It says it's a '.doc' but for some reason it hasn't been opening. Is there anyway you could save it as something else?
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Post by Mizagium on Apr 9, 2009 10:12:58 GMT -5
I could just paste the actual content into an email and send it that way.
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