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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Mar 23, 2010 14:44:11 GMT -5
GO GO GO!
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Post by Xelwes on Mar 23, 2010 21:53:15 GMT -5
Plot: Student dies(So far we're thinking of using Derrick.) Odd occurrences begin to happen to main character(The one with the camera, since my idea I was putting me into this position.) Sightings of Derrick start springing up. Friends of Derrick(The entirety of the participants of the videos) begin to investigate. "Things" start showing themselves to "Me". Begin to look for supposedly dead character.
Note: The last lines are typed such as the opening words in the Marble hornets videos.
Video 1: Camera guy(Main character) is leaving house to do a project(Subject is something like the government so he goes to a government-like building in the woods to tape it.) As he is taping, dead student(Derrick) begins showing up in many of the shots. After reviewing the tapes camera guy notices. Last line: That guy wasn't there when I taped this. Where could he have come from?"
Video 2: Friends are shown the video. Skeptical at first that the kid wasn't there during video. Then someone points out that the person looks like Derrick. Someone says something along the lines of "Who turned the camera on?". Mind reading abilities show in camera guy(Will now be referred to as me.) He says "what?" and someone says "nothing. I didn't say anything." Last line: "I swear I heard him/her say something. I have a headache now."
Video 3: First line(also written): "Derrick once told me that he used to have horrible headaches. A few days before the crash he looked disheveled. I wonder what happened...I have a headache." "It happened again. No one touched the camera..Its recording me....Almost like it wants to document me. I caught it three times last night." Students discuss the crash in which Derrick died. Discuss how there was only one car, it looked like an explosion came from the inside, and how there was no blood, or burns. I get headache, someone points out blood on my nose.
More videos later.
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Post by Mizagium on Mar 24, 2010 14:01:30 GMT -5
don't type it. use a commentary from you.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Mar 24, 2010 17:00:01 GMT -5
Lets save video number one for later.
Video one should be an introductory thing
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Post by Mizagium on Mar 24, 2010 18:01:41 GMT -5
I think so, too.
Don't jump right into the psychic (lol, took four tries to spell that right) thing. The first "log" should be something that is like why you've decided to do this.
Then later be like "I was reviewing this tape for a project, and i noticed something wierd..."
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Mar 24, 2010 19:06:10 GMT -5
I think so, too. Don't jump right into the psychic (lol, took four tries to spell that right) thing. The first "log" should be something that is like why you've decided to do this. Then later be like "I was reviewing this tape for a project, and i noticed something wierd..." BAM! Couldn't have said it better. |
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Post by Xelwes on Mar 24, 2010 20:38:06 GMT -5
Noted.
Video 1 is now just a introduction.
Video 2 is back to my original idea of us all just hanging out then, when I'm turning the camera off the camera captures Derrick in the window. The rest are the same.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Mar 25, 2010 16:25:49 GMT -5
k
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Post by Xelwes on Mar 27, 2010 23:18:01 GMT -5
Video 4: Message spoken by me: :Lately my life has been getting kind of rough. I thought that maybe things would get better soon. Then Derrick died in that crash...Things got weird. Animals act weird around me now.(Cuts to dog barking at me, and whining.) I hear people saying things...things that they say without saying.(Cuts to the mind reading scene) I've also begun to see stuff that isn't there.(Cuts to Tyler, Nicole, Ashley, and myself walking down the road, camera pointed at the sky. Tyler asks me if I'm ok. I shakily respond that I am. Camera is pointed down at Tyler, then back at the sky.) I see something out the window and cut the camera off.
Video 5: "I found a video of Derrick before the crash." Throughout the video Derrick is abnormally jumpy. He is constantly confused and doing something before he is supposed to. (I.E. Saying lines before others have a chance to say theirs, blessing someone before they sneeze.) Last comment: "I'm seeing a correlation."
Video 6: Late at night. Wes is running down the street. Runs into woods. Something rustles the bushes. Camera sees I'm not holding the camera. Camera turns towards the bushes and sees person in mask with hood pulled over so that no feature is showing. Camera is turned off.
Video 7: "Everyone has told me that they're seeing things. Its like a virus. We've decided to go to the woods to see what that thing is hiding." Group goes to old government-like building. After there for a little while I suggest we leave. We start to head back. Derrick appears. Everyone blacks out. "I felt alone." Derrick 'picks' up the camera. "So nice to see them again. Turns off camera.
Video 8: Camera turns on as we review the tape. No one is sure how we got back, nor what happened after Wes says that we should go back. Shocked reactions to Derrick. (Cuts to Wes) "I taped myself last night, not sure why. I'm....I'm genuinely scared." (Cuts to Wes in bed.) Wes sits up. Walks to desk, moving camera. He begins to scratch at the desk. Camera goes dark. (Cuts back to Wes.) "I need to show you what I wrote." Message has not been determined yet.
Video 9: Zac leans in to turn camera on to watch for anything. Wes can be seen holding his head. Nicole is sneezing, Wes is constantly saying "Bless you" before she actually sneezes. He reaches into his pocket for Tylenol. Adam and Marcus comment about the amount he keeps taking. Possessed friend is absent. (Not sure who this is, I think Ashley said something about this.) Possessed friend enters room wearing the mask. Starts to talk by writing on the paper. It is made known that someone is talking through him/her. Whenever someone tries to grab the mask they seem to be hurt by some invisible force. (not quite reveling that Derrick is the one talking.)
Video 10: Camera turns on to Wes fidgeting in his chair. Is on Facebook/some other site. Looks out window. Winces at nothing. Sees camera and lunges for it.
Video 11: Wes is sick. Someone decides to go out into the woods.(Possibly Tyler/Another guy that wishes to do this.) He's out in the woods, talks to camera about the weird feeling that he has. Constantly sweeps the camera towards the bushes. Gets to building. Says to camera, "I hope that was just me. Because I swear that I just saw someone without a face in a suit walking into the building. What are they keeping in there? I hope that what that person wrote isn't true." (Yes I feel like playing that Slenderman is trapped in the facility.)
Video 12: (I would prefer that Ashley is the possessed friend so we can do this scene.) Tyler is holding the camera peeking into Ashley's room. She is wearing the mask. She drawing and writing weird things. One is the Lord's prayer. Under it is written "Why pray to a unborn child?" The writing is neat on the small writing, but rough on the large frantic messages. Several drawings depict a man within a cross. One uses names to write out GOD on several pages(The finished pages are on the wall). On the G the names Wes, Derrick, Tyler, Nicole, and Ashley are prominent. Tyler has walked into to look at these. Ashley keeps going as if he isn't there. Tyler looks at Ashley. "Ash?" He whispers. She snaps her head at him. He runs out. Door closes.
Video 12 will have to change if Ashley doesn't want to be the possessed friend.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Mar 28, 2010 8:55:50 GMT -5
video 12 is legitimately creepy
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Post by Xelwes on Mar 28, 2010 11:13:18 GMT -5
Thats the complete point of Video 12.
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Post by Mizagium on Mar 28, 2010 11:26:03 GMT -5
hoshit. nice.
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Post by Myrdraxxis on Mar 28, 2010 11:41:54 GMT -5
I love how im completely ignored...
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Post by Mizagium on Mar 28, 2010 11:50:55 GMT -5
who are you?
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Mar 28, 2010 14:06:28 GMT -5
I love how im completely ignored... We'll find a place for you. |
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Post by Calefrun on Mar 28, 2010 14:36:39 GMT -5
I love how im completely ignored... Naw, you, me, and marcus are all in a vid. |
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Post by Xelwes on Mar 28, 2010 20:27:33 GMT -5
Adam, you'll be in here soon, along with Zac, and Marcus.
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