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Post by Xelwes on Jun 5, 2009 22:50:52 GMT -5
AM I IN ANY STORIEZ?!
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Post by Nel on Jun 5, 2009 22:51:45 GMT -5
no
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avalon
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Post by avalon on Jun 5, 2009 22:52:19 GMT -5
Tyler's POV:
I think Ashley is up...but if she is she hasn't noticed me. I'm doubled over above the toilet, thinking I'm going to throw up. Nausea has followed me all week, since we went into the woods. Perhaps my cuts are infected-they haven't healed and the skin seems almost, but not quite...green? In fact, all my skin seems greenish...
I don't get sick, but that isn't my real problem after I go downstairs. I notice Ashley through the window..and Nicole? Running to meet them, I realize that Nicole has a gun. "What's going on!?" if Nicole hears me, she doesn't show. She looks confused. Ashley tries to move behind me, and Nicole doesn't stop her. She doesn't even move when I take the gun from her. Its not normal though. It has some weird hourglass mark on the side, and its more slender than anything I ever saw on the t.v. "Nicole?" I try again, and she seems to come back. "He said I had to kill it. The orange dust, um.." Nicole stammers on, "Ashley is...pregnant, I-I guess, like, an..alien." "An alien baby?" I would have laughed, but it all seems so serious. "What!?" Ashley thinks it's ridiculous. Nicole takes a deep breath. "I'll tell you. It started late on Monday night..."
-Nicole tells us about this white demon and her "job"......
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Post by avalon on Jun 5, 2009 22:54:12 GMT -5
lol, Tyler, that comes later. And yeah, u almost did ha Nicole. Sry Wes, you left too soon..but I think I'm going to do one more before I go. It Adam's turn!!!
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Post by Nel on Jun 5, 2009 22:55:28 GMT -5
yay! hurry up in posring it cuz im going to bed soon but i want to read it.
(OMG im pregnant!!!!!)
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Post by Razgat on Jun 5, 2009 22:57:36 GMT -5
Lolz, I liked the plan we had before for Adam.
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Post by Nel on Jun 5, 2009 23:04:26 GMT -5
what plan was that did we change something
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Post by Razgat on Jun 5, 2009 23:06:07 GMT -5
It had to do with sacraficing balls to the ball graveyard. lolz
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Post by Nel on Jun 5, 2009 23:07:54 GMT -5
oh yeah... i liked that idea but this new one is good too.
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Post by Razgat on Jun 5, 2009 23:11:32 GMT -5
yeah
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Post by avalon on Jun 5, 2009 23:15:45 GMT -5
Adam's POV:
I wake up in my backyard, again...where's the orb!!Oh, there, good. I almost slap myself. Am I going insane? It's just a stupid ball, after all, and do I have to lock myself in my bedroom or something!?! I drag myself inside, shower, dress, but the orb is always within sight. Grabbing a box of some snack I head out to the backyard..again. Would it be weird to say the orb wanted me to go into the woods near my house? I'm not sure what I'm looking for, but I am looking. This time is different. Instead of walking in circles for hours, I come upon a clearing and a strange creature. I think I would have run normally, but the orb feels warm in my hand. The sensation is soothing, and I'm no longer revolted by the thing. Its human in form, I guess, but green, with scales, a horn and pincers. It looks at me with these huge, black eyes. "Sir!" It make some quick gesture, "your orders?" I'm surprised at the English, to say the least. "Do I know you?" I fell like I should say something. "He who wields the sleesphere rules us." Am I supposed to understand this? "Us?" "The sleestak." "Is that what you are? Where are the rest?" Some part of me knows this is weird, crazy, stupid, and that I should run away, but the orb is so soothing, It wants we to go. A ruler? I let the sleestak lead my deeper into the forest, through a circle hole in the roots of a large tree....
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Post by avalon on Jun 5, 2009 23:18:10 GMT -5
Sorry it took longer, I had some writing issues. I should just take his balls and be done with it! Hope you guys like it. I'll do Nicole and me at least on the morning, before I go to camp stuff and all that jazz..goodnight!
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THAT KID!
Shaken, not stirred.
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Post by Moniko on Jun 6, 2009 0:01:38 GMT -5
Calfrun from-TF2-knows-§aint Calfrun? ...Gentlemen... lolololol You're on my steam friends. ^^
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Post by Calefrun on Jun 6, 2009 8:19:41 GMT -5
Calfrun from-TF2-knows-§aint Calfrun? ...Gentlemen... lolololol You're on my steam friends. ^^ I am indeed that very same Calfrun ...mentlegen...
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Post by Calefrun on Jun 6, 2009 8:23:11 GMT -5
Tyler's POV: I think Ashley is up...but if she is she hasn't noticed me. I'm doubled over above the toilet, thinking I'm going to throw up. Nausea has followed me all week, since we went into the woods. Perhaps my cuts are infected-they haven't healed and the skin seems almost, but not quite...green? In fact, all my skin seems greenish... I don't get sick, but that isn't my real problem after I go downstairs. I notice Ashley through the window..and Nicole? Running to meet them, I realize that Nicole has a gun. "What's going on!?" if Nicole hears me, she doesn't show. She looks confused. Ashley tries to move behind me, and Nicole doesn't stop her. She doesn't even move when I take the gun from her. Its not normal though. It has some weird hourglass mark on the side, and its more slender than anything I ever saw on the t.v. "Nicole?" I try again, and she seems to come back. "He said I had to kill it. The orange dust, um.." Nicole stammers on, "Ashley is...pregnant, I-I guess, like, an..alien." "An alien baby?" I would have laughed, but it all seems so serious. "What!?" Ashley thinks it's ridiculous. Nicole takes a deep breath. "I'll tell you. It started late on Monday night..." -Nicole tells us about this white demon and her "job"...... yeah... I was right... I don't want to know
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Post by avalon on Jun 6, 2009 8:41:33 GMT -5
haha I kinda feel bad for Ashley now..
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Post by avalon on Jun 6, 2009 8:42:49 GMT -5
hmm, I think I may need to make each section longer, or write them together. Idk, it just seems hard to find them separated like that.
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Post by Calefrun on Jun 6, 2009 8:45:44 GMT -5
k
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Post by Nel on Jun 6, 2009 9:42:20 GMT -5
omg! that's amazing afton! i can't wait to read more!!!
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Post by avalon on Jun 6, 2009 19:08:06 GMT -5
MY TURN!!! ;D Afton's POV:
I wake up under the kiddie slid in the park. I feel the bottle in my hand and shudder. When I first opened the bottle, the night after Tyler's party, it wasn't so bad. The smell was horrible, and the trip it put me in was scary, but I didn't think it would ever happen again. It was like I took it in my sleep. The bottle gave me terrifying dreams with strange colors, symbols-and creatures...
...I even tried burying the thing after the third night, but it was always in my hand when I woke up...
I was sick of this! I call Nicole's cell, and go to her house, even though it's like five in the morning. Something seems wrong with her today, though. The feel of the room was awkward. "You know that trip we took down to the lake on Friday?" I ask her. She turns to face me. "What did you do with that bottle?" I take it out to explain the whole story, but she snatches it right out of my hands. "Hey! Dude, whats going on!?" I follow her to her room where she is half under the bed--looking for something? She pulls out a smooth, gray briefcase, lays it on the floor, and crosses her legs to sit in front of it. "Please, tell me you didn't open it," she's pleading with me. A knot is forming in my stomach. What have I done? I open my mouth, shut it again, and sit down--waiting. "We shouldn't have gone into the woods that day," Nicole opens the case and takes out a silver hourglass with black sand. Then she points to her left palm. Her tan skin is crossed with hundreds of tiny, silver filaments, like a tiny, shining net caught under her skin. My concentration is breaking, the light from Nicole's hind, stronger now, is mesmerizing. I reach in to touch it and notice, out of the corner of my eye, the silver hourglass being flipped over....
I feel like I'm going to have one of those trips with the bottle, but, as I fly into the wall of confusion, it breaks, and the vision is clear. I'm back in Nicole's room, but she isn't there. Looking down at myself, I discover that I am Nicole, but for some reason this doesn't alarm me. It's not real--I can feel the real world throbbing in some corner in my mind, a comfortable tightness. Nicole's phone--my phone?--says it is Saturday, June 7th, at 12:52 in the morning. Thaaaat's wierd...I know something happens now, but this reality doesn't want to stay here and show me. It doesn't matter though because I already know. My vision is becoming blurred, and the room falls away, leaving me in a nothingness, the whole knowledge of Nicole's experience combining with mine at once--just like how cotton candy melts on your tongue.
I can picture the tall, bright white man with the glowing green eyes coming through her window in the dead of night. I can recall their conversation. It was all an accident. Leftovers, left behind without proper care. We should have seen any of it. Nicole has a job that she must do in order to fix things. Poor Ashley...I reach that wall of confusion again, but this time I'm walking and its easy to just push my way through...
Nicole withdraws her hand, and the last grain of sand in the hourglass falls. "We need to go to Tyler's house," she says and helps me up. I was hoping to see the contents in her briefcase with my real eyes, but she has shut it before I've had a chance--whatever--I nod, and we go downstairs. Five tools, five chances....
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