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Post by Mizagium on Aug 8, 2009 9:18:40 GMT -5
I little earlier today, I came up with an idea for a trailer for the first season of Awesome Land (if its ever made).
Starts off with Veralice on top of the McJimmy's
"Ha ha ha...Once I secure McJimmy's, all of Awesome Land will be under my control."
then it sorta zooms out and onto a new scene
Inside Veralice's tower, Johnny chases Derp-Bot into the elevator. "Hey you robot!" Johnny exclaimed, producing his Ugly Stick. "You just ate mah kandiez!1 Imma gonna hitchu wit mah Ugly Stick!"
DERP DERP DERP! The elevator closes
"Oh, dag, I put the kittens in the cannons? That means I gave those orphans..." Narrator realized this just as an orphanage was mysteriously wiped off the face of the Earth/Awesome Land.
RIDLEY appears in the sky very menacing.
Cha Cha stands off somewhere with his trumpet. The wind blows back his cape.
Captain L is standing on his boat. "On to VERALAND!"
PFG emerges from Lake Awesome on fire and runs off.
Johnny is standing with Cha Cha and Narrator in Special Land. "Wait, how are we breathing underwater?"
Derp Bot flies through the air after an explosion. DERP DERP DERP!"
Narrator busts through the wall. "IDK MY BFF JILL?!?!?!?!?!"
The Mysterious Hooded Man watches from the woods.
Johnny shows the False Shield to Veralice. "Where's my sister?"
the Time Keeper is shown in a very dim light (in clock form)
Each of the main characters is shown in rapid succession (Johnny, Cha Cha, Narrator, Derp Bot, and PFG)
Out of nowhere appeared a giant mirror, which showed McJimmy's reflection. Instead of his true reflection, however, it seemed to show a younger McJimmy, with a suit, a car, and piles of cash.
"All of this could be yours if you surrender the restaurant to me, McJimmy." Veralice said.
McJimmy looks into it thoughtfully.
The scene flashes out and the tilte shows:
AWESOME LAND!: REIGN OF THE MAD EMPEROR
What do ya think?
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 8, 2009 10:13:25 GMT -5
feedback?
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Post by Myrdraxxis on Aug 8, 2009 11:08:56 GMT -5
Im not in season1 so I dont care  |
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Aug 8, 2009 11:16:59 GMT -5
this trailer sucks.
It has no drama what so ever.
\Seriously, it sucks
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 8, 2009 11:22:45 GMT -5
Its not supposed to show drama.
and there was very little plot in the first seaon upon whihc to base a trialer. its just a bunch of random scenes that might make someone go "huh, that looks kinda intersting"
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Aug 8, 2009 11:24:32 GMT -5
trailers are meant to trick the viewer into actually spending money on will probably turn out to be shit.
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 8, 2009 11:25:45 GMT -5
yeah well... you try then.
all of the stuff was from the posts/.
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Post by TEAM_DERRICK on Aug 8, 2009 11:27:22 GMT -5
(fine)
Announcer: In a world were writers don't give two shits about plot or character development: THERE LIES A WORLD THAT WILL BLOW YOUR MIND!!!!
SDAGBADHAHAEThqhjeklqgh koi3 yq563 4806t34uioq the rqtgioperhygtuie rqgi
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Post by Myrdraxxis on Aug 8, 2009 11:38:19 GMT -5
heh id spend money to se THAT
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 9, 2009 7:50:54 GMT -5
I need a bunch of "In a World Where..." things t put in the trailer.
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Post by thecheat on Aug 9, 2009 17:57:50 GMT -5
In a world where the fate of the world is in the world's fate's hands of the worl-wait, what? Who writes this? I don't care, I write it now. That's right, it's all me. ALL ME. YOU GOT THAT? YOU BEST BE GETTIN' THAT, SON. SHO' 'NUF...
IN A WORLD WERE I SEE THAT YOU SEE THAT I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE
In a world where undersea produce does not grow on trees...
In a world where noxious infants harpoon gesticulating tax attorneys with gravy-barbed gelatin cubes...
In a world where Simon says to SHUT YOUR WHORE MOUTH
In a world where babies aren't born, they're babies...
In a world where my rhombus is better than yours...
In a world where you are severely confused and somewhat angry, stuff sort of almost makes sense. Don't worry, you'll get it. Or you wont. But you will. Trust me, I'm a doctor. And a notary. And a Narrator. Mostly The Narrator. Mind you, that's THE Narrator. I'm not just some Narrator, punk. I'm the guy you need to pay money to so you can see me do the things I do. Go for it, you know you're curious.
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 9, 2009 18:14:29 GMT -5
(hows this?)
In a world where the fate of the world is in the world's fate's hands of the worl-wait, what? Who writes this? I don't care, I write it now. That's right, it's all me. ALL ME. YOU GOT THAT? YOU BEST BE GETTIN' THAT, SON. SHO' 'NUF...
Starts off with Veralice on top of the McJimmy's
"Ha ha ha...Once I secure McJimmy's, all of Awesome Land will be under my control."
Inside Veralice's tower, Johnny chases Derp-Bot into the elevator. "Hey you robot!" Johnny exclaimed, producing his Ugly Stick. "You just ate mah kandiez!1 Imma gonna hitchu wit mah Ugly Stick!"
DERP DERP DERP! The elevator closes
IN A WORLD WERE I SEE THAT YOU SEE THAT I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE
"Oh, dag, I put the kittens in the cannons? That means I gave those orphans..." Narrator realized this just as an orphanage was mysteriously wiped off the face of the Earth/Awesome Land.
RIDLEY appears in the sky very menacing.
Cha Cha stands off somewhere with his trumpet. The wind blows back his cape.
In a world where undersea produce does not grow on trees...
Captain L is standing on his boat. "On to VERALAND!"
In a world where noxious infants harpoon gesticulating tax attorneys with gravy-barbed gelatin cubes...
PFG emerges from Lake Awesome on fire and runs off.
Johnny is standing with Cha Cha and Narrator in Special Land. "Wait, how are we breathing underwater?"
Derp Bot flies through the air after an explosion. DERP DERP DERP!"
In a world where Simon says to SHUT YOUR SEXY MOUTH
Narrator busts through the wall. "IDK MY BFF JILL?!?!?!?!?!"
The Mysterious Hooded Man watches from the woods.
Johnny shows the False Shield to Veralice. "Where's my sister?"
the Time Keeper is shown in a very dim light (in clock form)
In a world where my rhombus is better than yours..
Each of the main characters is shown in rapid succession (Johnny, Cha Cha, Narrator, Derp Bot, Veralice, and PFG)
In a world where you are severely confused and somewhat angry, stuff sort of almost makes sense. Don't worry, you'll get it. Or you wont. But you will. Trust me, I'm a doctor. And a notary. And a Narrator. Mostly The Narrator. Mind you, that's THE Narrator. I'm not just some Narrator, punk. I'm the guy you need to pay money to so you can see me do the things I do. Go for it, you know you're curious.
Out of nowhere appeared a giant mirror, which showed McJimmy's reflection. Instead of his true reflection, however, it seemed to show a younger McJimmy, with a suit, a car, and piles of cash.
"All of this could be yours if you surrender the restaurant to me, McJimmy." Veralice said.
McJimmy looks into it thoughtfully.
The fate of the world is in the hands of six or seven people I guess. But more importantly, me.
Shows Narrator. "Yeah, I'm the Narrator."
The scene flashes out and the tilte shows:
AWESOME LAND!: REIGN OF THE MAD EMPEROR
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Post by thecheat on Aug 9, 2009 18:19:36 GMT -5
If we ever actually do this, Narrator should probably take a more active role in the plot. Austin and Tyler basically dominated the plot (because it was mostly their project...sort of), but the rest of the characters need a more important role this time around.
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Post by Razgat on Aug 9, 2009 18:20:07 GMT -5
I can picture that whole thing in my head with music.....
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Post by thecheat on Aug 9, 2009 18:21:20 GMT -5
I can picture this never happening for lack of CGI and whatnot.
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 9, 2009 18:21:55 GMT -5
what music? COMPOSE IT!
And to Lucco, no. Narrator was good as a side-character that did amazingly random things. Aside from constructing Taco Bell, he didn't do much in the way of plot in the first season.
I think we should do it EXACLTY like it was written, complete with extra characters that showed up and left without explaining why (Amarillo slim, Dante, and Il Caccitore)
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Post by Razgat on Aug 9, 2009 18:23:50 GMT -5
I DON'T KNOW HOW! But I wish I did. I've heard it before, but I don't know what it's called.....Although, I kind of modified it in my head. |
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 9, 2009 18:28:01 GMT -5
download Finale and use it.
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Post by Razgat on Aug 9, 2009 18:36:17 GMT -5
I WILL FACE MY FEAR OF DOWNLOADING AND GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Mizagium on Aug 9, 2009 18:38:34 GMT -5
I WILL FACE MY FEAR OF DOWNLOADING AND GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...wat? |
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