Post by Mizagium on May 21, 2010 10:54:45 GMT -5
"Special Royal Army!" came Xero's booming voice as the SRA climbed out of their ships. "Split up! Rowlek, take a battalion and capture Walter's palace!" Rowlek nodded and called his battalion (1500 men) to attention then marched toward the Emperor's castle. "Father, we march to the Clock Tower! We'll get that Vanity Mirror back at all costs!" Xero turned to Cha Cha, who had finally emerged from the Captain's quarters and was now standing in front of his brother with Salvatore. "Cha Cha, take Salvatore with you and continue to build our forces. Go to Ausum Land and inform Queen Crider that Awesome Land is entering the greatest civil war in the history of mankind. Summon the Ausum Army, then request the assistance of the Mambutoo O'Malley's in Really Cool Land. We'll need all the help we can get," he added sadly as he looked at storm clouds above the Clock Tower. Cha Cha nodded nodded and stepped to the wheel. Salvatore swung up the rigging and took his place in the crow's nest. The members of the Special Royal Navy scrambled below decks and stationed themselves at their oars and their cannons.
Xero and Phantom stepped forward and called their brigade (lol wut 10000 men.... Tyler, I'd suggest using a legion or battalion or brigade instead of a platoon.... random military names: legion - about 5000 men, battalion - 500-1500, regiment - up to about 5000 men, brigade - 2 to 5 battalions or regiments...... platoon - 30 to 50 men) to attention.
"Men!" Xero began. "This is a dark day! Five armies clash! We must not be outdone! We march to arms against the Time Keeper! Do not let his dark powers daunt you! We will not back down! We march to war! To end tyranny! To freedom!" A loud cheer started as Xero finished his motivational speech (unlike Motevator666's MOTEvational speeches, which only seek to MOTEvate, similar to deMOTIvate), drowning out Xero's command of "Move out!" The massive army took up their arms and marched towards the dark clouds, with Xero and Phantom at the head of the army. To center of the storm. To the source of the greatest evil in Awesome Land. To the Vanity Mirror.
Xero and Phantom stepped forward and called their brigade (lol wut 10000 men.... Tyler, I'd suggest using a legion or battalion or brigade instead of a platoon.... random military names: legion - about 5000 men, battalion - 500-1500, regiment - up to about 5000 men, brigade - 2 to 5 battalions or regiments...... platoon - 30 to 50 men) to attention.
"Men!" Xero began. "This is a dark day! Five armies clash! We must not be outdone! We march to arms against the Time Keeper! Do not let his dark powers daunt you! We will not back down! We march to war! To end tyranny! To freedom!" A loud cheer started as Xero finished his motivational speech (unlike Motevator666's MOTEvational speeches, which only seek to MOTEvate, similar to deMOTIvate), drowning out Xero's command of "Move out!" The massive army took up their arms and marched towards the dark clouds, with Xero and Phantom at the head of the army. To center of the storm. To the source of the greatest evil in Awesome Land. To the Vanity Mirror.